Hello Toshi, The pace at which you delivered your pitch provided me adequate time to understand what you were saying clearly. You adhered well to the guidelines by opening with a hook (in the form of several rhetorical questions), and you presented the nuances of your solution excellently. I would say that your elevator pitch is on the shorter side, right around the 50 second mark instead of the 90 second target. The key element that is missing from your pitch that will also help make up this time difference is explaining more of the problem. Otherwise, you’re off to a good start.
Hi toshi, Really great elevator pitch. Your enthusiasm was palpable. The energy you carry will most definitely cause you to stand out in a room of filled with competition, investors, and other entrepreneurs. There is definitely some room for improvement as you didn’t follow either of the rules that he gave us (to dress up and not to sit down). Can’t wait to see how you do moving forward!
Hello Toshi,
ReplyDeleteThe pace at which you delivered your pitch provided me adequate time to understand what you were saying clearly. You adhered well to the guidelines by opening with a hook (in the form of several rhetorical questions), and you presented the nuances of your solution excellently. I would say that your elevator pitch is on the shorter side, right around the 50 second mark instead of the 90 second target. The key element that is missing from your pitch that will also help make up this time difference is explaining more of the problem. Otherwise, you’re off to a good start.
Hi toshi,
ReplyDeleteReally great elevator pitch. Your enthusiasm was palpable. The energy you carry will most definitely cause you to stand out in a room of filled with competition, investors, and other entrepreneurs. There is definitely some room for improvement as you didn’t follow either of the rules that he gave us (to dress up and not to sit down). Can’t wait to see how you do moving forward!