1) Elevator Pitch Link
https://youtu.be/AGPVwo2gfjc
2) The feedback I received on my elevator pitch 2 was that I improved a lot more from the first pitch and looked more connected to the product. I was suggested to add more emotion while delivering the pitch and also use phrases motivating the customer to use my service.
3) Based on the feedback from the first and second pitches, I tried to add more emotion while delivering the pitch and also use phrases to encourage the customer the use my service. Since my product is an online service, I used the present quarantine situation to my benefit to encourage the customers to use my service right from their home. Also, I felt more confident while delivering the pitch and the pitch itself sounded good in my opinion.
Hey toshi, great job. I see that not only did you read the criticism and advice that people gave you but you took it to heart and made changes. taking constructive criticism this way will help you in life and in business. More emotion is always great for a pitch because it tell your audience that you have a passion and believe in your product.
ReplyDeleteHi Toshi, I think you were clearly able to accurately evaluate what you needed to improve on to improve your elevator pitch. I definitely think you strengthened your pitch by adding emotion as this is a very strong tool in persuading people to see things your way and want to become involved in what you are doing. I also agree having more confidence is another aspect that will help you to do better in public speaking and pitches.
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